Friday 21 July 2023

ELIZA: THE COUNSELLOR by Bronwyn Allen Owen

 

ELIZA: THE COUNSELLOR  by Bronwyn Allen Owen

 

My friend has many tricks

Don’t get me wrong

Good tricks, the best.

To listen deeply to

 the subtext

for grief

pain, being

in the zone

for creative souls

she loves best to counsel.

 

Her place of bliss is

hanging upside down

under the surface of the Indian Ocean

looking up.

Her blue eyes like a wave of intensity so blue

so bright

I had trouble looking at them

at first sight, when

she swept me off my feet

with her insight.

In the deluge my soul

previously jettisoned,

surfaced

and floated — enlivened.

 

My friend taught me to play

with my writing

with a girly, tart party

coffee, custard, cake way of

making a manuscript make sense.

Reading

laughing

love; generous love

right there.

 

A spirit once came to my friend’s shoulder

A ghostly curtain in the breeze

Drifting in the grifting

twilight of wakening sleep

fluttered

fluttering

fear ­— not turned,                         

sharpened —

the sharpest mind

erudite and eros

embodied.

Insight

like a cello concerto

to open hearts and minds

to solid factual fantasy

stories that keep us

bound tight

in tricky neurotic locks

like flapping vacuous flags,

mental as anything

boots and all. Tough.

While she

tender, fast, funny and

fearless

swims us

to the deep end of our being

into the downstream current

to reclaim

if we reach for it

our own flotsom of bliss.